Ok, so i’m not sold on this being the BEST punch line. I also thought “Kimbly had a hard time keeping her wristband on.” was good also.. do you have any suggestions?
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Ok, so i’m not sold on this being the BEST punch line. I also thought “Kimbly had a hard time keeping her wristband on.” was good also.. do you have any suggestions?
It still made me laugh full-heartedly even if you are unsure of it being the best punchline
I like it XD
/I/ think “Kimbly’s wristband kept slipping” works better
But still, good job!
Kimbly’s wristband plays music
I agree with eric, slipping would have been better. Still a great comic especially with 80’s Tenderness
either kimbly needs a bigger wrist…. or a smaller band. great comic!
It’s ok I guess. That’d be cool, like a mini- portable music listener, but with real tiny people!
“Kimbly bought a rocking new wristband”
How about, “Kimbly’s wrist band broke up.”
You know, just simply “Wrist Band” would do, just like the puns for the rest of your comics.
you know,i agree!
\m/ that’s a really small band.
i like the hairdos too.
It had me laughing before reading the commentary, so it works great. I do agree with Eric that “slipping” would be a better word.
Alternatively, Keith’s suggestion of her getting a “Rockin’ new wristband” is also pretty cool.
i don’t think u could do just wristband, i think it needs somthing with slipping! =^.^=